I want my resume to be edited.

The main goal is to edit my resume.
Please the description of my resume is from this link below (copy and paste it). My resume was looked by an expert and she gave me the feedback from the link. One thing she mentioned is that on my resume, it seems like I’m describing myself more like a doer than an achiever. If you can modify my wordings to make me sound like a doer, that will be great. I’m an achiever; it’s just my way of wording things make sound more like a doer. But please take a look at what the expert says and go from there. Also make it look so beautiful with a nice visual presentation.
Finally, I will appreciate if you write a nice career summary for me.
NOTE: if everything can be fit in one page, that will be great. I heard resume shouldn’t be more than a page.
This is not an essay. This is a resume. So I don’t think double-spaced should apply.

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