The social value of Crowdsourcing- A new way of solving some of societies most pressing problems

The social value of Crowdsourcing- A new way of solving some of societies most pressing problems

I need primarily someone who can rewrite/improve my essay. I would prefer someone with English as a native language as I am not a native speaker and have problems with structure and phrasing. I need the essay to be more coherent. That means the information in there needs to be better linked.

The academic essay deals with how crowdsourcing could be used to solve social problems like poverty, inequality, natural disasters, financial crisis and disease. This is discussed with the help of practical examples. Among the practical examples are “Kiva” a crowdfunding platform, “Ushahidi” a platform that facilitates citizen Journalism, “Foldit” a platform that engages people in scientific problem solving to track new cures for diseases, “Busuu” a language learning website and a project called “FreeRisk” that uses crowds to monitor the financial market.

Content and Structure:
The essay mainly consists of indroduction, body and conclusion. The introduction starts with Crowdsourcing and its role in problem solving. It points out that Crowdsourcing has a high problem solving capability and is suited for solving easy problems like finding a t-shirt design (e.g.Threadless) as well as for complex problems like finding the answer to an mathematical or scientific problem (e.g.Innocentive).
Then it states that there is increasing evidence that crowds could help to resolve some important social issues (already mentioned above). Evidence is given by “James Surrowicki” in his book “the wisdom of crowds”.
In the body paragraphs example by example is explained. Here it is just important to explain how each example creates social value by solving a certain problem of social relevane. The first three examples Kiva, Ushahidi and Busuu are very specific in showing how crowds can solve a problem. The last two examples “Foldit” and “Prediction markets” are not really elaborated and just show how crowds could potentially help (more like a future outlook). The conclusion should shortly summarize the characteristics of Crowdsourcing that are essential to solve problems.

As you can see I have already started with the essay and there is a lot of information in it. Now I need somebody who is organizing my thoughts. This basically means that the examples need to be better explained. Also a sound conclusion and quotes are missing. And please keep in mind that English is not my primary language which is why there may be still some mistakes in the essay. I am particularly unhappy with the last two examples (Foldit and Prediction Markets) which should provide readers more with a future outlook and the conclusion ( needs to be better formulated).

 
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